Dear beta reader,
I greatly appreciate you taking the time to review the draft and provide your honest, insightful feedback.
Here is the link to the Draft with Suggestion rights;
Link to Google Doc was emailed to you.
Please DM me at X or email me at email@example.com if you can't find it.
This review is not about typos. Instead, the most useful feedback is about stuff like;
- Where you get confused or lost or have an unanswered question
- Where you disagree, or have different experiences
- Where you started to get bored and feel like skipping ahead or giving up
- Anything you find especially interesting or helpful
You can leave comments in the GoogleDoc or email them to hello[at]oykun.com
STEP1: Select and Click the "Add comment" icon
STEP 2: Write your comment
It is important for me to know what works well as much as what doesn't. So that I can use that style of writing in the coming chapters as well.
“I had a big ‘a-ha moment’ here!”
“OMG. This is my favourite part so far. Literally, tell me what to do…love it!”
“Mind blown by this line!”
“I feel like I wanted an extra page explaining these in more detail. I could not really take in.”
“This section threw me off. I thought I missed something between the earlier section and this one.”
“I don’t understand how this part is relevant to the book.”
“Finished the Chapter, but I didn’t see what I was expecting. Can you add ____ as well please?”
I appreciate you may be busy with work and life. For that reason, I share only Chapter 1.
I want to proceed and release this book as soon as possible in the best shape it can be with your generous feedback. For that reason,
So that I can start working on your suggestions and share the next chapter.
As a thank you, I want to list your name in the book as a Contributor 🙏
Your name can live forever in this book and reach thousands, hopefully.
Huge Thanks! :)